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[Utopian Mining]

This game. It reminds me of a simplified version of MotherLoad. Did you get your inspiration from that game?

[Fixation]

An excellent game, however, regarding the ending
SPOILER ALERT

I've played company of myself. But still, I can't tell: Was she killed or simply forgotten?

FreeAsANerd responds:

Thanks!

No, he didn't forget about her entirely. He only forgot what happened that day, and had to piece it together later on once he realized that she wasn't around. When he tells this story in the original, he skips over this period where he was blissfully ignorant.

[Alien Attack Yaytime]

This being your first actual game, I'll go easier on you.

If you were to improve on the sound effects, and actually work on the art, this game would be decent. You have the mechanics well. The game itself is very limited right now though. If your not very good with artwork, then I would recommend you find someone else to do the artwork for you (since your good at programming, and I wouldn't mind helping out). Also, adding a storyline here would give this game meaning, and would truly improve the experience. Otherwise, this game will be lost in a sea of shoot em ups, since it does not stand out in the least. I'll be more than glad to help you out in anyway I can, from organizing a collab to helping you out with content.

Here on NG, its best to take a long time and submit quality work than too spend a little while on something that is the same as everything else, or dull and mundane.

AxelrodGames responds:

I truly appreciate a great critical review such as this, yes, I am not very good at the artwork, It also didn't help that I didn't spend much time on the art, the bulk was spent on programming (which I am decent at I think), I suppose I could try to add a small storyline, I don't think all that much will come out of it though, I might be better off starting from scratch on a new game that trying to completely overhaul this one, thank you for your review.

[Riddle School]

I cant help but notice the similarities to Pico's school

[War of the Web]

We need a way to report spammers and people who make fake accounts

[Maximum Velocity]

Nice use of the 3d effect in a flash; it reminds me a bit of the old arcade racers because of its style. However, the game can get repetitive quite quickly because of its simplicity. If there was a goal in sight/ an end to the road, it would give this game greater purpose, as there would now be a very good reason for not crashing with the other cars.

[Spacedude Gravity Danger]

Great game. I feel like the music doesn't quite match though, but thats just my opinion (seems like it would have been better with something of a more retro style). The difficulty was pleasant, and this game is certainly not too easy. I like how you used the concept of gravity here, and its not just mere switching of direction. The controls were well made as well. I feel like the game could have used a map though, since the area is impressively huge. I think this may even make the front page. Hope it does.

Rob1221 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Also, the game does have a map, but you'll have to backtrack a little bit to find it.

[I Am Flying To The Moon]

Found a glitch: When you go to instructions, you can't go back to the menu.
Also, there is no pause feature. This must definably be added.
Other than that, this is a great game! The physics in it are great, it is challenging enough, and the upgrades are swell. Once its polished up, this will be one of the best "rocket" games out there.

[Cool West]

This game has great mechanincs. If angry bird worked like this, it would be a lot better. The only cons I see is that you get to use the mouse only once, the pig 2-3 times, and that you cant zoom out. If a bit more work would have been put into this game, it would be even more enjoyable.

[a sudden meeting]

I'll Just get straight to the point

Pros: Music
Neutrals: Artwork
Cons: Game Mechanics, Game was over-extended and way to long, And the meaning wasn't impactful. Most Art games contain more than three words at the ending. Overall, this game was unsatisfying.