Revo357912's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kirby's Cutter Shoot!]

So this is the first game you made huh. Wish I knew you knew programming. This is very basic, but still decently done, and ima guess you mighta improved even a tad bit since 2010, so how bout we make a game together based on your chat mini-game that was based off of BlessedSin?

Lionelion responds:

Im as willing as you are, just PM me whenever!

[Pico Radio]

I really like this radio, and it remains truer to the NG style.

I'd say this radio is much better than the original.

deathink responds:

Thank you, I put a lot of time and effort in to this to make it look and feel like it is a part of NG.

[Fixation]

An excellent game, however, regarding the ending
SPOILER ALERT

I've played company of myself. But still, I can't tell: Was she killed or simply forgotten?

FreeAsANerd responds:

Thanks!

No, he didn't forget about her entirely. He only forgot what happened that day, and had to piece it together later on once he realized that she wasn't around. When he tells this story in the original, he skips over this period where he was blissfully ignorant.

[Alien Attack Yaytime]

This being your first actual game, I'll go easier on you.

If you were to improve on the sound effects, and actually work on the art, this game would be decent. You have the mechanics well. The game itself is very limited right now though. If your not very good with artwork, then I would recommend you find someone else to do the artwork for you (since your good at programming, and I wouldn't mind helping out). Also, adding a storyline here would give this game meaning, and would truly improve the experience. Otherwise, this game will be lost in a sea of shoot em ups, since it does not stand out in the least. I'll be more than glad to help you out in anyway I can, from organizing a collab to helping you out with content.

Here on NG, its best to take a long time and submit quality work than too spend a little while on something that is the same as everything else, or dull and mundane.

AxelrodGames responds:

I truly appreciate a great critical review such as this, yes, I am not very good at the artwork, It also didn't help that I didn't spend much time on the art, the bulk was spent on programming (which I am decent at I think), I suppose I could try to add a small storyline, I don't think all that much will come out of it though, I might be better off starting from scratch on a new game that trying to completely overhaul this one, thank you for your review.

[Spacedude Gravity Danger]

Great game. I feel like the music doesn't quite match though, but thats just my opinion (seems like it would have been better with something of a more retro style). The difficulty was pleasant, and this game is certainly not too easy. I like how you used the concept of gravity here, and its not just mere switching of direction. The controls were well made as well. I feel like the game could have used a map though, since the area is impressively huge. I think this may even make the front page. Hope it does.

Rob1221 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Also, the game does have a map, but you'll have to backtrack a little bit to find it.

[Aero Warfare 3D]

Not bad, in fact, very good. Before you fully publish this, I recommend the following:
-A little more detail on enemy ships
-Levels
-More variety of enemy ships, perhaps a total of 5 different kinds, with bosses
-More kinds of hindrances and power-ups instead of that one bomb that does damage
-Multiple cloud layers, so that you can move the ship up or down a cloud layer. This gives more mobility to enemies, can make for interesting bosses, and makes the game look even further 3D.

If you do this, plus work on the game a bit more, then I'm pretty sure this could even become one of the top games of newgrounds. You gave it a nice looking 3D effect already. Im sure you can do it, and I'd be glad to see this in the front page.

keilyn3d responds:

Thanks, you really have expanded my vision about this game, I will work on what you said, I will make a new game with all the tips you said me.